Tuesday, May 09, 2006

J's Poem on the Bliggity-Blog

Here's Another one from Justin:
Throw your records out the window
I'll throw mine out, too
Forgive me my debts
I just want to hear you
If a scratchy letter on your window
Will bring a girlish smile to your face
Give me a word; show me your pearls
I'll write another with great haste
Its been a cold winter
A gloomy night indeed
A fruitful tree is growing
From this long-dormant seed
But don't leave me in this dead silence
I've seen my flaw in your mirror
My eyes are playing tricks on me
As I scrutinze ever nearer
If its my fault please forgive me
If its yours we're a pair
And though my own attempt is yellow
Please show me that you care.
So...that's it (by-the-by... the grammer mistakes such as the "its" are as written so don't blame me)
As always constructive anti-jerk-criticism is accepted.

6 Comments:

Blogger Leighanne said...

Never mind. You'll have to live out the rest of your life not knowing who the heck jc_penny was, but knowing you knew her and she sometimes commented on your blog. I don't know what else to tell you about who I am!

~JCP

6:43 AM

 
Blogger Feanor said...

Perty nice poem. Justin's a pretty spiffy chap. I just realized that poets don't have to be philosophers.

8:36 PM

 
Blogger Feanor said...

And yeah, obviously you didn't make a very big impression Leighanne

8:38 PM

 
Blogger Amy Thorne said...

Ok, I thought I would randomly comment on your blog (no offense, but I don't think that I could add any to the randomness here - ha). Oh, I'm Amy from back in the days that you want to forget. :D

3:16 AM

 
Blogger Leighanne said...

I'm going to be really hurt if you remember Amy. ;-) Thanks, Feanor. I appreciate the kind comment. And you consider yourself a philosopher?

~JCP

6:39 AM

 
Blogger HighKingFingolfin said...

I dont remember any of you :D

6:52 PM

 

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